【美少年】

【美少年】

隱隱書卷氣，翩翩一少年,

雖自苦寒來，卓識有遠見。

過海來求學，作舟已數年，

不負苦心人，總有豔陽天。

 January 7, 2013

As a young fellow, you have wonderful aplomb. Although You are

from a common family, you have a great mind. It has been a

few years since you came to Canada for your education. Keep doing what you are doing.

Where there's a will there's a way.

 

 五律平起首句不押韻
⊙平⊙仄仄
⊙仄仄平平（韻）
⊙仄⊙平仄
平平⊙仄平（韻）
⊙平⊙仄仄
⊙仄仄平平（韻）
⊙仄⊙平仄
平平⊙仄平（韻）
送友人
李白
青山橫北郭，
白水繞孤城。
此地一為別，
孤蓬萬裏征。
浮雲遊子意，
落日故人情。
揮手自茲去，
蕭蕭班馬鳴。

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