開篇詩有意思。如果第5、6兩句成對仗就更規整了。
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• 是的,這首詩並不規整,隻求傳情達意吧。年少這聯是追憶,情感上很痛。 -浮雲馳- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/05/2021 postreply 16:27:29
• 是的,這首詩並不規整,隻求傳情達意吧。年少這聯是追憶,情感上很痛。 -浮雲馳- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/05/2021 postreply 16:27:29
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