候鳥偶遇娟子和安紅子哲重逢這兩段寫的比較有感情,能讓讀者感受到內心的波動。
感覺應該還有兩集。
• 其實這部小說到這裏可以結篇了,但是我還想再寫兩章,寫寫兩個人重逢後的美好,所以還不是結篇。 -擁抱哥- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2020 postreply 09:48:02
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