原創爵士風格英文歌曲[Bakawali] by 我愛微風

作詞：Timothy, Vanchael
作曲，配樂，演唱：我愛微風
伴奏用了五個音軌：雙鋼琴，弦樂，弦貝司，爵士鼓。
這首爵士樂曲寫於一個月前, 有幸得到Timothy的英文填詞, 後又同Vanchael商議改動, 成為我第一首英文原創歌曲.

Bakawali is a rare flower, blooms at midnight, once and only once in a life time.


Take my heart oh my darling,
for caresses it is longing.
Please keep it beating,
or leave it bleeding,
as long as you are willing.
Take my dreams sweet darling,
unforgettable love is weaving.
Oh give them wings,
and make'em flying,
tonight I am no longer weeping.

All my life I've been waiting,
oh waiting,
waiting for this moment coming,
blooming once and no more,
complete and intoxicating,
it's for you!

Can't you see I am longing,
oh longing,
I am longing for your embracing,
before I start fading,
before I am leaving,
Love me!

(music)

Take my heart oh my darling,
for caresses it is longing.
Please keep it beating,
or leave it bleeding,
as long as you are willing.
Take my dreams sweet darling,
unforgettable love is weaving.
Oh give them wings,
and make'em flying,
tonight I am no longer weeping.

All my life I've been waiting,
oh waiting,
waiting for this moment coming,
blooming once and no more,
complete and intoxicating,
it's for you!

Can't you see I am longing,
oh longing,
I am longing for your embracing,
before I start fading,
before I am leaving,
Love me!

所有跟帖： 

• 原創英文歌 超強！ -rayray- ♀ (60 bytes) () 10/15/2008 postreply 21:33:23

• 謝謝喜歡啊， 好久沒有來了。 -我愛微風- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 07:45:19

• 好作品好演繹！ -水雲間~- ♀ (114 bytes) () 10/15/2008 postreply 22:23:58

• 非常感謝你聽了好幾遍，還仔細點評。我很需要這樣的回饋。 -我愛微風- ♂ (6 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 07:47:02

• 真棒啊!歌好聽,唱得也好.頂原創!! -楓葉如丹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 08:24:05

• 得到誇獎總是很高興，如果能提些建議或感受就更好啦。 -我愛微風- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 09:23:47

• 這個厲害，頂原創，原唱！ -johnz002- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 09:37:03

• 多謝鼓勵。補充一句，詞作者都是地道的中國人。 -我愛微風- ♂ (48 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 10:04:46

• 服了、服了。丁頁！ -DooDoo- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 10:08:39

• 多多地謝謝多多。嘿嘿 -我愛微風- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 10:23:23

• 頂原創詞，曲，唱！第一首英文原創就這麽棒！ -Forever_Young/- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 10:09:12

• 關鍵是這詞寫得好。這種爵士樂曲還是配英文詞更地道些。 -我愛微風- ♂ (219 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 10:29:17

• 再聽再頂微風才子。 -Sussie97- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 12:52:05

• 再謝SUSSIE -我愛微風- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 13:13:31

• 我不懂，瞎說啊 -cat01- ♀ (205 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 17:51:35

• 你一點都沒有瞎說啊。開始的低音觸到了我的極限。 -我愛微風- ♂ (136 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 18:09:23

• Vanchael的版本在這： -我愛微風- ♂ (272 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 18:12:35

• 這麽高水平的原創英文歌，爵士味很正宗很迷人，大頂！讚！！ -breeze~- ♀ (289 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 19:06:39

• 謝謝，很同意你的點評。 -我愛微風- ♂ (96 bytes) () 10/16/2008 postreply 20:34:17