聽此曲隨筆! (但不知此為何曲, 故在此求助)
木蘭看晚霞!
滿步看黃昏,
西陽海邊下.
落日拌晚霞,
風聲帶柔沙.
未查平仄!
謝謝! 查證後封職! (俺剛剛做了一個打油詩裏有風的!)
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• 注: 隻能封將軍級以下職位! -Sweetlife- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2006 postreply 06:52:56
聽此曲隨筆! (但不知此為何曲, 故在此求助)
木蘭看晚霞!
滿步看黃昏,
西陽海邊下.
落日拌晚霞,
風聲帶柔沙.
未查平仄!
• 注: 隻能封將軍級以下職位! -Sweetlife- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2006 postreply 06:52:56
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