This one is much better! :)))

Thanks for all your responses;it's nice to see how you polished your poem and expressed your feelings,and the outcome is beautiful! But why so sad? I think it a little dangerous to stand by the sea at 2:30am.You'd better take care of yourself, as it should have been very cold then at the seaside, and that you might very likely have caused a bad cold or fever.But it seems that you are strong enough to undergo the low temperature and to avoid the potential dangers,so it's okay.Anyway, it should be a very special experience to do so.But no matter what is saddening or troubling you,be sure to be happy! You should be happy because you have both a strong body and brave spirit to do such an unusual thing. Please know that not everyone possesses such physical and mental strength to approach such kind of tasks. You are lucky! Have a nice day and God bless!--kitty