小閑的一年級詩作

小閑去年幼兒園畢業的時候突然詩興大發，一口氣作了“Graduation is here”、   “You are perfect when you are just yourself”、 “I like school”等好幾首詩作 (見我的博文《小閑的第一篇詩作》)。如今一年過去，她又作了幾首詩，看看有沒有進步。

1.  The Zoo

 The zoo is full of animals

A giraffe uses its high neck to reach leaves

The penguin waddles on the ice

The lion roars out loud

The tiger growls in his cage

The polar bear plays with a barrel

The frog jumps and hops

What an exciting place!

I can’t wait to visit again!

2. Pet Store

On a sunny day

I am going to a pet store

I see one singing bird

I see two sleeping kittens

I see three goldfish swimming

I see four hamsters eating

I see five puppies playing

I see six rabbits hopping

I see seven guinea pigs drinking

I see eight turtles walking

I see nine mice running

I see ten frogs jumping

What a Busy Pet Store!

3. Rain

Rain drip drops on the sidewalk

Rain drip drops on the garbage cans

Rain drip drops on the roof

Rain drip drops on the window

Rain drip drops on the tree trunk

Rain drip drops everywhere！

What a raining day!

媽媽覺得去年寫的是一種情緒，而今年學會了更多的detail的描述。而且好象她很喜歡用排比句式耶，讀起來有一種重複的節奏美。（大言不慚誇自己的娃 ）

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