節奏掌握得不太好,
3 3 4 4 4 4 4 1
至少也得
3 3 4 4 4 4 5 1
5個哈呀
看你這信念,也隻能悲壯了...
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• 這次倉促了點,下回編個更偉大的信念,按五言律詩的格式來 -旅人小刀- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 05:16:42
節奏掌握得不太好,
3 3 4 4 4 4 4 1
至少也得
3 3 4 4 4 4 5 1
5個哈呀
• 這次倉促了點,下回編個更偉大的信念,按五言律詩的格式來 -旅人小刀- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 05:16:42
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