撞車了要出庭，請英語好的XDJM幫我看看怎麽寫求情詞？

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今天早上帶孩子（１３個月）出去玩了一會，她不小心摔交了，崎蓋蹭破了皮，我就趕快帶她上車，準備回家找創可貼．結果她死活不願意上車，經過一番掙紮後，硬被我困進了carseat.一路上哭喊掙紮不至．

就在一個十字路口，我在有stop 標記的路上，按規定停了下來，準備右拐．
主路上沒stop，限速３５，車子當時比較多，交通很密集．
我就等了一會，這時看到主路上左邊來了一輛車，她好象打了向右的轉向燈（但我現在沒證據），我就開始啟動，準備右轉，這時她確沒有轉，直行衝了過來，我一時沒回過神及時刹車，就撞了上去．我的車頭碰到了她的車後門．車倒沒變形，就是蹭了點漆下來，我的前車牌撞掉，也蹭掉了漆．

這時大家都把車停在路邊，她拿出手機喊警察，我隻好等著．這時腦袋一片混亂，竟然也忘記了她打了轉彎燈的事情．警察來了，登記了過程，被撞的車主敘述了事件過程，我也覺得是自己的錯，但是沒有在ticket背後認罪的地方簽字，警察隻讓我在單子正麵簽字了．

警察給我個單子，說我可以選擇上法庭，也可以打電話給法庭，然後要付個罰款就可以．

但是時候我仔細想，當時真是她打轉向燈誤倒了我，我才開始啟動車．並且我的車頭已經上路了，她也沒有刹車，而是直衝過來．但是現在我沒有任何證據，也沒有留下當時別的車做證人．

第一次遇到這樣的事情，大家幫幫我，我該怎麽辦？

下邊是我寫的個事件草稿，在法庭上備用，還畫了出事的圖，拍了我車的照片．

On september 13, around 9:15. At the intersection of thurstin and E marry road. I did a full stop beside the stop sign on marry road and ready to turn right (to thurstin av.) I find another car coming from my left on thurstin av.
When that driver coming to intersection, she did a right turn signal and her speed is 25 mph(That is a limitation 35 mph road.) , so the signal and the speed misleading me , I thought it was safety to move. So I started my car slowly (3 mph). Actually she did not turn right when she arrived at the intersection, but went straight. Obvirously she saw me before she get the intersection, because she did not slow down, but try to pass on my left. When I found her, I break my car immediately, and that is why it was only a scratch, not a big bump. But it was too late, accident happened.

That driver gave me a wrong signal, and her speed was low. That was the main reason misleading me to start my car. On the other hand, I moved because:
First, my baby’ knee was bleeding at that moment, so I was hurry to look for a bandage for her.
Second, I already stopped on the stop sign more than one minute. And at least two cars were behind me. I did not want block other traffic.
I always drive very carefully since I get my driver licence. And I got 100 point in my road test.
這些是描述，後邊就是求情了．

I know I am a responsible person in this accident. This is the first accident in my life. I hope it is also the last one. And I will drive more carefully in the future. We are low income family, so the fine is really too much to us. So could you please reduce my guilty and cancel this ticket?


我把條理總組織不好，還請大家多多幫忙，再補充一些對我有利的辯解啊，謝謝大家

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• 麻煩斑竹保留一會吧，多謝多謝． -家有獅子狗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 12:08:17

• I don't think you need the last paragraph. -NO1NO1- ♀ (170 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 12:23:12

• 也就是寫出來備用的，免得法官問話，我答不清楚．不一定都用的上． -家有獅子狗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 12:49:53

• I am sorry. It is your fault even she flashed the light. -沒錢仔- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 12:24:36

• 我知道我錯了．當時就是因為孩子受傷，我才心急了． -家有獅子狗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 12:48:52

• 回複：you might emphasize this point in your statement. -Six110- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 13:01:22

• 我也準備了孩子當時玩的照片，和孩子腿上有傷的照片． -家有獅子狗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 13:14:51

• 個人看法：如果你沒有過硬的證據證明你是沒有過錯的， -知名度比較高- ♀ (76 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 12:32:30

• Plead guilty w/ explanation is helpful in removing pts - 回複：個人看法 -pjiang- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 12:40:13

• 我就是想解釋一下，求法官能輕判，少點罰款，不記點什麽的． -家有獅子狗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 12:47:48

• 回複：many people got some deductions on the penalty, -Six110- ♂ (63 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 13:03:41

• 據說是這樣，所以我打算去碰運氣．反正$60已經包含在$150的罰款裏了 -家有獅子狗- ♀ (90 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 13:13:40

• 你沒有車保險，保險公司的agent應該可以給你一些建議！ -Lyon- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 13:07:42

• I have auto insurance -家有獅子狗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 13:11:32

• 回複：求情詞？--useless -blackbird-md- ♂ (246 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 14:11:57

• 上法庭可能出更多錢。回複：撞車了要出庭，請英語好的XDJM幫我看看怎麽寫求情詞？ -caveolin-3- ♀ (182 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 15:03:05

• 為什麽罰款會增加?我打算去認罪,但同時也求求情.希望能減點罰款. -家有獅子狗- ♀ (83 bytes) () 09/19/2007 postreply 18:43:04