收到推薦信,但是教授拒絕修改,大家看看這最後一段能用嗎?

For RFE, 我被要求證明NIW的三點,可是這封推薦信沒有excellent, extraodinary, outstanding 之類的評價,即使在最後總結裏教授也拒絕寫出我的貢獻要超過一般美國同行的評價.請有經驗的熱心人給看看。

In summary, Dr. *** has made substantial achievements in his field. His research plays a role in the national endeavor to fight brain diseases, and ultimately benefits our nation in health care and economy. I am confident he will offer his continuous impact on this field in the future. Therefore, I highly recommend that Dr. Li be granted permanent residence status.

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回复:收到推荐信 -Aniu- 給 Aniu 發送悄悄話 (31 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 12:47:14

It is good enough! -WTO9- 給 WTO9 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 12:49:36

I think it is a good one. -panchangjiang- 給 panchangjiang 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 13:01:14

回複:收到推薦信,但是教授拒絕修改,大家看看這最後一段能用嗎? -LoveWhiteRabbit- 給 LoveWhiteRabbit 發送悄悄話 (120 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 13:01:32

回複:good enough -chuppie- 給 chuppie 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 13:07:40

回複:It's not a good summary for a RFE! -Layu12- 給 Layu12 發送悄悄話 (440 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 13:12:47

agree with it! -einmaliger- 給 einmaliger 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 13:19:20

回複:回複:It's not a good summary for a RFE! -Jie_BJCN- 給 Jie_BJCN 發送悄悄話 (32 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 13:39:03

回複:收到推薦信,但是教授拒絕修改,大家看看這最後一段能用嗎? -WorthIt- 給 WorthIt 發送悄悄話 (420 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 16:17:45

evidence 已經都在pitition letter裏了,可是officer -俱樂部新會員- 給 俱樂部新會員 發送悄悄話 (74 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 18:44:54

This is not good enough. -fsa2000- 給 fsa2000 發送悄悄話 (245 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 18:39:28

我也是最恨 play a role 這一句! -俱樂部新會員- 給 俱樂部新會員 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 18:46:45

謝謝各位熱心的朋友!看來我得另找了,求人寫吹牛的信太難了。 -俱樂部新會員- 給 俱樂部新會員 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/15/2006 postreply 18:56:08

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