馬上開學了，小娃的小說寫了4萬2千多字，暑假寫了2萬3千多字。希望最後可以寫出完整的一本

With slight eagerness, I grabbed Vasilikós who was now calming down, and ran down to the cafeteria area. I was at a loss of what to do with him, perhaps to the barn? Or was I simply not meant to take him out in the first place? Ramhorn had been taken out by Sophie; I didn’t really care what she went, however, now, it might reveal itself as a mistake. Looking around, I saw other familiar people, all of them seem just as confused as I, some people bundling a dragon in their arms, their small hind legs dangling down under them. Stressfully looking around, I realized that none of the dragons looked anything like Vasilikós, with all of the looking unique to one another. As the man turned the corner from the adjacent hallway, he menacingly stared at each and every one of us before barking.

His voice echoed around the tightly concealed chamber, his voice digging into me as if he was trying to guilt trip me. “C’mere! Bring your dragonets too.” He growled, his voice sounded almost scratchy which made me want to cough. I shook a bit, staring at the man, wondering if I should go to him, perhaps this was a threat? However, cautiously looking around, I strutted forward towards him as he narrowed his eyes at me, unnervingly specifically me, and muttered something under his breath that made the few light hairs on his chin quake. Nearing him, I slowed my pace, making sure to always stay a few feet away from him which was something the man seemed to notice and take a well-concealed offense. “Look,” he muttered, with less hostility than usual this time, “Either you find one of us officers to take your dragonet, or you bring them to the barn yourself.” Pausing slightly, as though he felt like he wasn’t rude enough before shouting, “NOW CHOOSE!” 

 

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• 好羨慕你家小牛娃，我家這個讀說寫都困難戶 -tidytiger- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 16:22:13

• 很棒！加油小才女！ -可能成功的P- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 16:30:36

• 厲害！詞匯很豐富！ -yunick- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 16:35:37

• 讚才女 -DukeAB- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 16:39:07

• 一並感謝大家：） -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 16:45:18

• 有看頭 -hz82000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 16:52:33

• 讚！了不起。祝圓滿成功。-：） -有言- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 16:55:03

• 加油！ -ashouluo2012- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 16:59:02

• 很讚！ -jingzhumama- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 17:02:22

• 小才女棒棒噠！ -麻辣串串- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 17:03:19

• 很好。希望能出版。 -icando2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 17:23:40

• 讚她小小年紀的determination 和深刻的思維和寫作水平。 -不常冒泡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 17:32:30

• 加油小才女！ -windyLL- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 17:32:40

• 好厲害，以後出書吧。 -Pilsung- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 17:35:06

• 不明覺厲！ -米奇的廚房- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 17:48:28

• 這筆杆子。。。。嘖嘖！ -Shanghaigirl98- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 17:51:46

• 你家娃文和理都好啊。 -馬來人- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 18:16:26

• 厲害！看好小才女！ -Croissant_22- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 18:43:37

• 牛娃 -紫牡丹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 18:45:27

• 牛，讚毅力 -成功的兔- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 18:54:50

• 小作家，讚 -nnong- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 21:18:00

• 天才啊。讀她的文字好像讀古典小說，節奏不緊不慢，有張有弛。行文流暢，頗有韻味。 -小鬆鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2023 postreply 22:14:59