再分享一段小娃的小說，感覺寫的真poetic。語言真的很神奇

“Can we stick together?” Hisako asked so very convincingly, so convincingly that I wanted to actually stick with her and trust her, to tell that we would both be fine; but that wasn’t the truth. I would’ve been lying if I said that. It wasn’t okay, nothing was and might never be again, it’s like a riddle I’ve heard before. It destroys mountains, kills kings, slaughters dragons, and disintegrates diamonds; time. Time changes so much, it could just be a matter of seconds and your life could completely turn upside down, and yet this same thing that had betrayed me so many times would now be the thing I needed more of. I needed time to think of what to do, to think about my next step in this maze of one thousand pathways, yet, it was as if a lion was chasing me, stealing away this precious resource. One path ends in death, the others lead in tragedy, however, through the shrouds of murder and betrayal, there was a path that was better than the rest: an escape.

 

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• 小天才。 -籬笆08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:13:43

• 年少時咱不用“天才”這個詞：） -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:16:34

• 人才！ -小鬆鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:22:40

• 是不是智商特高的小娃？讚！ -追求平凡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:16:30

• 哈哈哈哈 -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:16:55

• 你家看來也是文科生 lol -jingzhumama- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:16:41

• 是啊，我也這麽懷疑：） -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:17:15

• 文科生挺好的 -jingzhumama- ♀ (210 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:21:21

• 這裏很多人認識你。你怎麽沒上紫檀英雄榜？ -avw- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:20:17

• 啥英雄榜？ 你說熊榜？ -jingzhumama- ♀ (86 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:22:51

• 這裏 -avw- ♀ (53 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:24:50

• 我有在啊 lol -jingzhumama- ♀ (70 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:28:30

• 你大概改名了 -avw- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:31:34

• 真是天生的，讚！ -janeice60- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:20:39

• 你女兒的文字感覺真好。樓下說孩子的智商來自母親，你可以好好驕傲一下！ -小鬆鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:21:42

• +1 -嘉荷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:23:37

• +2 -夏雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:31:19

• +3 -Croissant_22- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:39:11

• +4 -紫牡丹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:47:02

• 大叔說實在，不喜歡坐在閣樓裏幻想出來的東西。 寫不出“悲慘世界”， 也寫個“LGBT世界”之類的？ -updateonline- ♂ (268 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:27:59

• 悲慘世界太好了！那一個一個人物的豐富飽滿情節的跌宕起伏，百看不厭 -fakegreen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/14/2023 postreply 05:42:47

• 我覺得她是在模仿哪個名家的寫作風格，個人猜測勃朗特。你家娃比同齡娃老 -zaocha2002- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 23:58:02

• 和我娃一樣，都愛寫，多鼓勵繼續努力 -PearlJo- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/02/2023 postreply 01:18:44