小娃小說寫了15000字了,最近時間比較少

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“All of you new recruits, go!” He roared, clearly shocking off the shoes of the people sitting nearest to the tattooed man. Haru immediately took that golden opportunity and sprinted off towards the direction of the hall, probably thinking in his mind how thankful he was to get away from us weirdos. All I could do was stand in confusion as a bunch of kids ran past us, following the direction Haru was heading towards; the hallways adjacent to the halls that Sophie and I came out of. 

“So, should we go…?” I asked Sophie, with her face perfectly reflecting how I felt: utter confusion. 

Sophie drew in a long breath through her mouth before grabbing my arm and sprinting after the people slowly turning the corner. The hallway slowly expanded into a large room with the ceiling being coated in a layer of tinted glass. The sunlight in there was intense, yet, a chill crept down my spine as a small old man slowly hobbled and sat down on a kitchen chair in the center of the room. The man took his time, carefully making sure his long black and red coat didn’t get caught in the seat and brushing off the dust slowly floating around the room. “So,” he creaked, pausing so aggravatingly long that I wanted to go up and scream at him, “dears. You, you must be so very curious of why, why you are all hear today.” He stopped again, gasping for breath and coughing, “We are the, The Slayers of Draconic Predators, yet we cannot simply accept everyone. So, this is the Slayer Test. Here, we test the limits, of, of your capabilities. If you can survive 3 days in here, without any outside interference, you will be accepted as one of the Slayers.” The old man stopped, gasping for breath as two men gently patted his back to circulate his breathing. 

Even though the man’s voice was old and weak, the words weighed 1,000 pounds, pounding in my head like a set of drums. Test… test, limits… limits, accepted… Those words echoed around, bouncing into one another in the most peculiar ways. 

 

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不明覺厲啊,好好鼓勵,有大出息 -老糊塗2- 給 老糊塗2 發送悄悄話 老糊塗2 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 10:55:35

先讚再讀 -追求平凡- 給 追求平凡 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 10:55:45

寫得太好了!快出書吧 -DogandGod- 給 DogandGod 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:13:14

感謝,這才寫了26頁,非要寫長篇,希望能最後堅持寫完。平凡建議寫短篇,我給小娃建議過,她說寫短篇的滿足感不夠,所以她還是 -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (21 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:14:59

牛蛙 -yzhl888- 給 yzhl888 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:14:56

希望能持續有後勁,畢竟還有方仲永在前,哈哈 -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:16:50

牛蛙 -zaocha2002- 給 zaocha2002 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:21:32

這寫作的確挺神奇的,小娃寫的時候總是聽YouTube視頻作為背景聲音,她說有助於她思路的開闊 -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (121 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:23:45

LOL,她是不是還自言自語? -zaocha2002- 給 zaocha2002 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:29:56

這個還沒發現,哈哈哈。不過她的確說過睡覺的時候她會構思她的小說 -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:33:35

寫作時候自言自語 -zaocha2002- 給 zaocha2002 發送悄悄話 (260 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:35:15

哈哈哈,他自己意識到了嗎? -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:38:57

是啊 -zaocha2002- 給 zaocha2002 發送悄悄話 (117 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:40:37

牛娃! -julie116- 給 julie116 發送悄悄話 julie116 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:28:10

太厲害了 -qqdragon- 給 qqdragon 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:41:13

比我是強太多了:) -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:50:47

投稿,寫作比賽,夏校.... -兔快跑吧- 給 兔快跑吧 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:49:13

感謝指路:) -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:51:04

這個厲害! -phoenix05- 給 phoenix05 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 12:00:59

精彩 -兄貴- 給 兄貴 發送悄悄話 兄貴 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 12:09:46

哇,你女兒太牛了,寫的很好啊。趕緊開始參加寫作比賽吧。 -Pilsung- 給 Pilsung 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 12:23:08

寫作比賽都要13歲以上的。考慮到時候試一下 -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 13:01:01

你女兒是天才啊。她從小讀了不少古典名著吧。文筆很成熟。 -小鬆鬆- 給 小鬆鬆 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 12:36:41

古典的沒怎麽讀呢。打算這個暑假讀點莎士比亞的。她的讀書量感覺在美國孩子中不算讀的多的。她喜歡反複讀一本書,讀小說也屬於 -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (64 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 13:05:03

厲害! -DukeAB- 給 DukeAB 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 13:08:33

寫的不錯,讚一個!多大了? -其樂無窮- 給 其樂無窮 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 13:16:06

11歲 -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 16:22:29

她的確追求做個有趣的人:) -兩女寶媽- 給 兩女寶媽 發送悄悄話 兩女寶媽 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 16:23:12

好曆害! -Xitong999- 給 Xitong999 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 14:11:00

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