兄之七律,越發老辣,筆觸蒼勁有力,必須大讚!
頸聯後句,稍微調整一下,屠民猶道朕寬容,更覺痛快,如何?
兄之七律,越發老辣,筆觸蒼勁有力,必須大讚!
頸聯後句,稍微調整一下,屠民猶道朕寬容,更覺痛快,如何?
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謝謝老師指正,我當時也覺得這句不太好,但想不出來更好的。謝謝老師~
-一劍無痕-
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12/29/2025 postreply
17:31:38
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一劍兄客氣了。與共識者相互切磋交流,乃一大快事也。。。
-山水蒼茫-
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12/30/2025 postreply
10:43:29
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