suno創作的rap

俺寫的歌詞,上傳後不到一分鍾除了2個版本,比較一下,哪個好聽些

 

Wet Dream

Once upon a time in the Gaslamp District
I was walking my Scottish Terrier Biscuit
We strolled deep into the district 
Suddenly stopped and barked my poor Biscuit
From the corner of a pride banner alley
Marching out a rowdy rally
After a sniff Biscuit started dashing and weaving
through the rally without clashing
I was pulled sprinting and panting
while deafened by the most synched chanting
Let's go Brandon
Let's go Brandon
As we reached the end of the rally
we saw a gigantic puppet upside down
It’s an inflated black-suit buffoon
wearing an wavy orange crown
Biscuit sneaked around the the balloon
till he stopped in front of a grand building
Its neons flashing rainbow at high noon
DEPARTMENT OF JUSTICE
my Biscuit barked out his sign reading
Pace and sniff, pace and sniff
He spotted a drying rack tall and wide
Hung on the rack a king bed sheet
fancy enough for the royal groom and bride
Biscuit sniffed and sneezed at a conspicuous stain
Its shape looked like a country club in Spain
I image searched the stain with my iPhone
AHA, it's Mar-a-Lago in a Tsunami zone
Before I google Mar-a-Lago I may adore
I was tapped by a blonde circling on roller-skates
She pointed at Hooters next door
Smelly the fried chicken I just ate
I shook my head n pointed at the stain
She glanced and bursted out "Oh, not again"
To answer my confusion to her scream
she bent down and whispered to my brain
It's hand drawing of our AG's wet dream

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據說德皇 Joseph II 聽了莫紮特首演後的評論 -木有文化- 給 木有文化 發送悄悄話 木有文化 的博客首頁 (60 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 08:51:31

哈哈哈,也是你對suno的評論?還是對俺的歌詞,too many words? -顫音- 給 顫音 發送悄悄話 顫音 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 09:01:51

哈哈,我有時看帖腦海裏會浮現第一個畫麵,就發了,並不一定有專指 -木有文化- 給 木有文化 發送悄悄話 木有文化 的博客首頁 (38 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 09:33:59

哈哈哈,這位童鞋,要自信,要相信你的歌詞寫得挺好的。 -JoyAnna.- 給 JoyAnna. 發送悄悄話 JoyAnna. 的博客首頁 (167 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 12:10:05

哈哈哈 -顫音- 給 顫音 發送悄悄話 顫音 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 12:32:07

一個黑人,一個白人 -老鍵- 給 老鍵 發送悄悄話 老鍵 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 10:49:09

哪個黑,哪個白? -顫音- 給 顫音 發送悄悄話 顫音 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 11:28:57

第一個黑人,第二個白人 -kingfish2010- 給 kingfish2010 發送悄悄話 kingfish2010 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 11:58:32

從歌裏聽出了黑人口音和白人口音的差別?展開說說。:) -JoyAnna.- 給 JoyAnna. 發送悄悄話 JoyAnna. 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 12:06:27

我瞎猜的,哈哈。 不過,我有個英國朋友說他能聽出來黑人,白人,亞洲人的聲音 -kingfish2010- 給 kingfish2010 發送悄悄話 kingfish2010 的博客首頁 (120 bytes) () 02/23/2025 postreply 08:17:50

2讓我想到Eminem -顫音- 給 顫音 發送悄悄話 顫音 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 12:33:54

Exactly -老鍵- 給 老鍵 發送悄悄話 老鍵 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 13:24:32

更喜歡第一個,聽覺和”視覺“一致:) -cw- 給 cw 發送悄悄話 cw 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 18:49:32

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