自由人兄過獎了,真如兄所言,俺都飄起來了,倒是曾經另外一首有留言說聯想起達利

The world in a puddle

 
A puddle
tiny and shiny
in the sun
in the middle of a muddy trail

A puddle
passed by hikers
who rush towards the snow-painted peak
countless steps
countless splashes

A puddle
halts an exhausted hiker
He kneels, bends, and gazes at the puddle
In his eyes, young meadow
aged forest
graphite mount
and its white crown
shining in the infinite azure of sky
 

StanPetrovich1.0 - This reads as if a movable essence of a great painting done by Dali was churning along, which was my interpretation. And maybe one his best.

Nicely done.

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