拜讀了你的大作. 有些感想, 不吐不快..
你的文章從頭到尾, 滲透著些許得意, ......也許同時帶些矯揉, 帶些造作, 也許是些淺薄也不一定.
真心希望, in reality, your life is really like what you have described in your article not by imagination, or at least from your angle of view the life is like that.... indeed. Do not get me wrong, i am not saying this due to being jealous or something similar. Just from the bottom of my heart i am not feeling positive about it.
我曾經讀過一些描寫生活, 自然的散文. 非常喜歡. 但是從你的文章裏, 我看不道那些美,隨意和輕鬆. 隻是感到你似乎對於表達你比別人活的優越更感興趣. 這也是我讀了你的文章的唯一感受.
No offence, just want to express what i am geninuely thinking while reading your article. Perhaps someone else is having the same feeling as mine? or I am the only one having such a weird feeling??
