這是一個畫畫的朋友給我這幅畫的評語，主要說構圖上的問題，貼在這裏讓大家分享

You have massed in your trees a lot better with this painting ...A word on composition: You have a reverse "C" composition or possible an "O". The 2 spots for a focal point are where the C shape turns right and the other at the end. You have 2 prominent trees at both these sites. ......make one of them the focal point. Now, to complete the "Travel of the eye" within your "O" composition, paint a few of those reeds so they connect with your right tree reflection. Now your eye goes from the lower right corner ..around the C and back down the reflection to the patch of reeds and then back around the journey again. But do emphasize one of those trees as your focal point ..make it more interesting then anything else in the painting.....take us there and give us something to look at as our reward for taking the journey. :))

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