讚，詩和朗誦都好。

This poem is a good example that it needs no false drama to make poetry. As a reader I felt poetry start to enter gently with these lines: 

山前有一排樹。雨來過，鬆鼠來過

青山之外，是河流，你看不見

Lin Mu is a good poet, but his recent works seemed to have declined in quality since he joined the  小團夥 led by jinjiao and dancingwolf and ...

 

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• no false drama to make poetry：讚同。山骨那句難讀，不但容易像山穀，還要讀出骨架來，就隻好犧 -snowandlotus- ♀ (229 bytes) () 04/24/2024 postreply 04:33:24