門麵雖小故事深 繁花堪比翰林春
書中若有顏如玉 一路隨風笑紅塵
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讚好詩!嚴格按律詩論,“小”、“紅”二字出律。
-朱之謂-
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04/30/2025 postreply
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多謝。格律詩太難寫,我的水平,隻能夠寫打油詩。
-孤獨求愛-
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