我家6 年級寫的,完全在學校完成的,她不看書,隻看漫畫書

 

Ms.J

Language Arts

14 December 2020

Memory

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Twas the night before Christmas and all through the house , not a creature was peeping , not even a mouse. A memory Then struck me , something from my dreams , something cold , something green. Something from a movie , something from a play. Something with a heart , something with a brain. Something that moved me , something that changed. This something…..,I thought , was it something from a memory? Was it a memory that lost sense to everybody? Was it something important? Something I later forgot? Was this something someone? Someone with a dog? The dog’s name was Max , I think , I believe. The someone was cruel , though not what they seemed? The something is someone who has love for his mother. This someone has feelings , though they seem to be covered. Covered by darkness , covered by dread , covered by the feeling that gets in your head. This someone , I thought , must be an awful lot brave. Though maybe , he is always afraid? This person is just a thought though , a thought in a pinch. A thought that is also known as the very evil Grinch.

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這篇文章感覺挺有想象力,思維很跳躍的 -natalia98- 給 natalia98 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 02/09/2023 postreply 13:55:31

對,但是她根本不看書的,隻看漫畫書,學校裏的書應付一下 -tax2- 給 tax2 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 02/09/2023 postreply 15:24:28

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