今早起來,看了兩份簡曆,回複在此.可能對其他朋友有借鑒意義.

盡管周會上說了N次關於怎樣寫賣人廣告, 但當收到的要改的簡曆還是通病.
今早起來,看了兩份,回複在此.可能對其他朋友有借鑒意義.

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R 大兄弟,

I read your resume.
Made some modification.
Please see attached file.
Please do following change:
1)Add an OBJECTIVE, tell people what are you looking for
2)Move Education to first page
3)Add a COMPUTER SKILL section
4) For work experience, please give Quantity, 要量化, How complex of the project is, how much budget, or $$ amount involved, etc. give detailed numbers.

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J 大妹子,

I read your resume.

Please do following change:
1)Add an OBJECTIVE, tell people what are you looking for
2)Move Education to first page
3)Replace TECHNICAL SKILLS section with COMPUTER SKILL section, move to first page.
    List all the software name, version in this section. Get rid of the general terms.
4) For work experience, please give Quantity, 要量化, How complex of the project is, how large of the data, or $$ amount involved, etc. give detailed numbers.

所有跟帖： 

• Add an OBJECTIVE is NOT necessary, companies are looking for can -blue5star- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 15:26:11

• Add an OBJECTIVE, Period ! -黃國人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 16:05:24

• Add an OBJECTIVE is NOT necessary -blue5star- ♂ (111 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 15:30:41

• If U don't know what job u r looking 4 -美國老土- ♂ (234 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 16:33:33

• 回複：If U don't know what job u r looking 4 -blue5star- ♂ (1182 bytes) () 08/09/2011 postreply 23:56:06

• Absolutely Agree! I worked in these high tech inc. -美國老土- ♂ (349 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 07:39:37

• 回複：今早起來,看了兩份簡曆,回複在此.可能對其他朋友有借鑒意義. -麗水金沙- ♀ (17 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 21:04:54