靈之歌

當死去的那一天
當終於可以讓身心自由
靈魂的展翅
便是臨終的夙願

我靜靜地躺著
那些華麗的衣表
還有被最後精畫的臉額
最好的愛的附屬品
盡你所為的喜歡
來最後裝飾你一生夥伴

讓我來給未來探路吧
身旁輕盈的腳步
是孩童的好奇顧盼
塔塔塔拍打靈木的聲音
那是愛的呼喚

我都知道。。。

終於可以把一切的美好帶走
把一生的幸福帶走
把身和心一起帶走，送遠

在那裏
安我們的新家
盡管這裏依然
讓我留戀

09/23/2006

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~&~ = smile ??

:)

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嗯。。。同意~~~

謝謝 ~&~ (天，這叫啥呀。。。）

Have nice every day~~~~~ha

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"Sadness" does not come from "the one who died"....

but those who love/cares about her/him ....

so, in a poem on Death, the perspective is the most important, i think ....

thanks!!

have a joyful day!

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Thanks, Z/Z...

That’s the way when I am thinking of death: after all, there will be no scariness, no sadness. Death could always mean a new life….

Having a meaningful day each day is more important than anything else. :):):)

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nice poem ....

could be polished a little, i think ....for Death is a difficult thing to write [no one knows Death except the dead :) right??

cheers!!