Frederick Seidel's Snow
by CBA7
I read it and melt it and drink it.
It stays in my blood.
It beats in my heart.
It floods my mind and never goes.
弗雷德裏克·賽德爾的《雪》
by CBA7
我讀《雪》,融化它,喝它。
它在我的血裏停留。
它在我的心裏跳動。
它充斥著我的腦海,永不消失。
P.S. My poem was inspired by reading the poem below.
Snow
by Frederick Seidel
Snow is what it does.
It falls and it stays and it goes.
It melts and it is here somewhere.
We all will get there.
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美壇活動【Poem Reading Tuesday】Snow by Frederick Seidel - CBA7發表於 美語世界 - 論壇 | 文學城 (wenxuecity.com)
Frederick Seidel's Snow - CBA7發表於 美語世界 - 論壇 | 文學城 (wenxuecity.com)
Shiloh Phoenix - I appreciate how you mimic the original but this is still wholly your own thing - it has a nice cadence to it. I read it three times.