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《Ideal Friend》《理想的朋友》

(2022-12-13 21:23:40) 下一個

《Ideal Friend》
by CBA7(小西)

he/she is in a corner of this world
near or far
not in an ideal world
but he/she is an ideal friend
brings rainbows in rainy days
silent in sunny days

《理想的朋友》
by CBA7(小西)

他/她在這個世界的一個角落裏
或近或遠
不在理想的世界裏
但他/她是一個理想的朋友
雨天帶來彩虹
晴天沉默

P.S. This poem was inspired by Ray Cope, a British poet, and his poem Ideal World below

Ideal World.
by Ray cope

In an ideal world-------
I'm in a cottage by a lake.
A cottage,nestling against woodland.
I'm clad in denim.
I'm shod in wellington boots.
I'm tending a garden:
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] by my side.
And a wise old cat who lurks in the hedgerow.
I'm stooping amidst flowers.
Grubbing happily in the loam.
Contented:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a canoe, gaily painted.
Out in the water.
A sharp - edged craft of native American ilk.
I'm watching fish rise.
I watch the wild duck bobbing.
I catch the sun on my paddle,
as i glide silently by.
Through water-lilies,through rushes.
Sometimes drifting with the breeze.
Unconcerned:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a forest,bathed in dappled shadows.
I'm rustling through leaf litter.
I'm snapping twigs underfoot.
I'm listening to birdsong.
And the scamperings of small things.
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] roving ahead of me.
I am in awe of the greenness.
I am the watcher of bees.
I am brother to The Green Man.
Fortunate am i:
【Ray's poem was published on Allpoetry, the largest and best poetry site in the world】

相關鏈接:

【歲末文藝賽】《Ideal Friend》《理想的朋友》 - CBA7發表於 書香之家 - 論壇 | 文學城 (wenxuecity.com)

Ideal Friend - CBA7發表於 美語世界 - 論壇 | 文學城 (wenxuecity.com)

《Ideal Friend》《理想的朋友》 - CBA7發表於 文化走廊 - 論壇 | 文學城 (wenxuecity.com)

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CBA7 回複 悄悄話 回複 '艾唱' 的評論 : 謝謝大歌星小艾的點評和鼓勵。

艾唱 回複 悄悄話 好棒的主題好美的詩,每一個人都希望有一個這樣的好盆友。
CBA7 回複 悄悄話 回複 '煙酒嗓' 的評論 : 謝謝詩人歌星的雅臨和點評!方塊字裏麵的理想朋友更理想 :)

煙酒嗓 回複 悄悄話 好詩!與上同感!能在方塊字間讀出圖畫與色彩,還有遐想~~
CBA7 回複 悄悄話 回複 '可能成功的P' 的評論 : 謝謝P君的點評和鼓勵。我是先寫的英文版,然後譯成了中文 :)

可能成功的P 回複 悄悄話 很美的小詩,更喜歡中文版本。
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