《What's Your Language?》
love
answers a British girl
counting the ravens on Tower Bridge
amor
shouts a Spanish boy
kicking a ball in a soccer field
amour
says a French woman
sitting on the black iron bench under a sycamore tree
Liebe
whispers a German gentleman
riding a white horse in a forest
愛
speaks a Chinese lady
walking on the Great Wall with a purple skirt
【備注】這首英文詩於10月7日發表在Allproetry,並在當天被選上了首頁。Allpoetry is the world's largest and best poetry site. 下麵是評分(Autorank)和部分評論(Comments):
Autorank Total 10 ( higher is reduced to 10 ), professional similarity 10 (of 10), concrete vs abstract 2 (of 2)
Likes: Ray Cope, Sand Singer, Jferry, Skyoak37, Treepower34, kaye, Rawena, Rowan Fox, Samara, LinaLNU, Poetryan, Ava L, Joy2B, Stiff Little Shrew, Adventurous, brendan law, Cexi Steph, Dark Migration
Poetryan - Grá (love)
responds an Irish boy
reading a lovely poem in the comfort of a home
Jferry - Yes, there are several ways and languages in which to celebrate love. And we should celebrate that fact ... as this lovely poem does.
Stiff Little Shrew - Great idea. Perhaps all languages are languages of love after all.
P.S. The Tower of London is famous for it's ravens, below are the links about the ravens on Tower Bridge:
The Ravens at the Tower of London, England (historic-uk.com)
Ravens of the Tower of London - Wikipedia
中文版本
《什麽是你的語言?》
愛
一個英國女孩回答
她在數塔橋上的烏鴉
愛
一個西班牙男孩喊道
他在足球場踢球
愛
一個法國女人說
她坐在梧桐樹下的黑色鐵椅上
愛
一位德國紳士低語
他在森林裏騎著一匹白馬
愛
一位中國女士說
她穿著紫色的裙子走在長城上
相關鏈接:
愛的星空: 《What's Your Language?》《什麽是你的語言?》 - 由CBA7發表 - 文學城 (wenxuecity.com)
書香之家: 《What's Your Language?》《什麽是你的語言?》 - 由CBA7發表 - 文學城 (wenxuecity.com)