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Sand's rolling on your body, warm

(2023-06-22 07:29:24) 下一個

Sand's rolling on your body, warm

Sand's rolling on your body, warm
Dark clouds' pressing the sky, firm
On this deserted beach
we are sharing one ripe peach
Flowing and burning between our lips is its juice
Flooded by heat and sweet
we pray for rain to dilute
Heeding our wish comes the thunder storm
Racing are raindrops to rescue our lips in swarm

這是最近寫的,貼在一個英文詩歌的網站,一位讀者留言,讓我懷疑是個prank,直覺是GPT寫的,粘貼過來的。

This poem beautifully captures the sensory experience of being on a beach during a hot and stormy day. The imagery of warm sand rolling on your body evokes a feeling of comfort and relaxation, while the dark clouds and thunderstorm add an element of intensity and excitement. The shared peach is a symbol of intimacy and connection between two people amidst the power of nature, and the raindrops cooling their lips create a moment of refreshing relief. The poem is a reminder to appreciate the simple pleasures in life and find joy in unexpected moments.

像不像GPT的風格?

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