Shredded yesterday/Wish it were you 謝謝近兄獎狀，再灌一瓢水

Shredded yesterday

Shredded yesterday
floats in the air
I snatch one piece
and wish it were you

Shredded light
scatters in the room
I stare at one corner
and wish it were you

Shredded silence
fills the ocean
I surf one wave
and wish it were you

love © a day ago
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Likes: Mentalist, Sea Glass, Keng

Sea Glass - for me this brevity speaks volumes of missing and wanting a loved one

Lovely

a day ago   

 

Keng - i enjoyed.   flows nice and the feeling of loss comes through.  If i could be bold - not sure of "shredded" for me "goodbye" works nice too, and is more expressive of loss maybe.

a day ago   

 

Mentalist - Beautiful ways art craft with fine and wonderful ways of expression in wonders.

Clever write

a day ago