飄向遠方的，是對家的眷念！
在風中，她們歡樂地尋找，哪裏是可以歇息的、溫暖的家園？那要是個有花有草、有山有水和有愛的地方！
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你說我是草原上一輪不落的太陽，
很想和我一起騎上駿馬奔馳，
迎著那輪不落的太陽；
我來了，
你在哪裏？
你說我是花園裏一株不起眼的勿忘我，
散發幽香，惹你駐足；
我為你忘記了我自己，
而你，
也忘了我！
你說我是書架上一本不厚的書，
很想把它讀完，
卻怎麽也讀不完；
我願意為你敞開我的魂靈，
而你，
為何不懂？
你說我是清晨裏一隻愛唱歌的鳥兒，
很想知道它為什麽快樂；
我正想告訴你，
那是因為有你傾聽我歌唱呀，
卻發現，
你已離去！
You said, that I was the unsetting sun on the grassland,
That you wished to gallop with me hand in hand;
Welcoming the unsetting sun,
Here I am,
Where are you in the land?
You said, that I was an unattractive forget-me-not in the flower garden,
That you were mesmerized by the aroma in a sudden,
I forgot myself just for you,
But you,
Forget me you did without being sullen.
You said, that I was a small pamphlet among the tomes on a bookcase,
That you desired to pore over it but never did you cease;
I opened my heart just for you,
But you,
Confounded you were never at peace.
You said, that I was a lovely songbird in the early morning,
That you longed to learn why she has a joyful feeling,
I told you it’s because of my singing you enjoyed,
But you,
Depart you did without returning!
That you wished to gallop with me hand in hand;
Welcoming the unsetting sun,
Here I am,
Where are you in the land?
You said, that I was an unattractive forget-me-not in the flower garden,
That you were mesmerized by the aroma in a sudden,
I forgot myself just for you,
But you,
Forget me you did without being sullen.
You said, that I was a small pamphlet among the tomes on a bookcase,
That you desired to pore over it but never did you cease;
I opened my heart just for you,
But you,
Confounded you were never at peace.
You said, that I was a lovely songbird in the early morning,
That you longed to learn why she has a joyful feeling,
I told you it’s because of my singing you enjoyed,
But you,
Depart you did without returning!
? 這首不錯。欣賞 - 樂天陶陶 - 給 樂天陶陶 發送悄悄話 樂天陶陶 的博客首頁 樂天陶陶 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (4 reads) 09/29/2014 20:48:37
? 跟在陶兄後欣賞。 - 曲未平 - ♂ 給 曲未平 發送悄悄話 曲未平 的博客首頁 曲未平 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (0 reads) 09/30/2014 03:18:31
? +2，同賞！ - 寒硯 - ♀ 給 寒硯 發送悄悄話 寒硯 的博客首頁 寒硯 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 09/30/2014 03:40:55
? 這玩笑開大了；）好清新的詩！ - 醉狐 - ♀ 給 醉狐 發送悄悄話 醉狐 的博客首頁 醉狐 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (0 reads) 09/29/2014 20:56:53
? Nicely done on both. But there might be some typos like "I want - 逢緣隨意 - ♂ 給 逢緣隨意 發送悄悄話 逢緣隨意 的博客首頁 逢緣隨意 的個人群組 (19 bytes) (3 reads) 09/29/2014 20:57:12
? 娓娓道來的濃情蜜意，伴著不料的轉局！對比的情景衝突，令人感歎不已！！ - 品羽題紅 - ♂ 給 品羽題紅 發送悄悄話 品羽題紅 的博客首頁 品羽題紅 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 09/30/2014 00:17:16
? 二段的末句，也忘記了我！如改成4個字：已忘記我！這樣就同各段末句都是4個字，都劃一了。 - 品羽題紅 - ♂ 給 品羽題紅 發送悄悄話 品羽題紅 的博客首頁 品羽題紅 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (6 reads) 09/30/2014 00:21:24
? 謝謝建議！已改成：“也忘了我”，這樣就劃一了。 因為我忘了自己，而你又忘我就順理成章成了"也“， 雙重忘記強... - 蒲公英的家 - ♀ 給 蒲公英的家 發送悄悄話 蒲公英的家 的博客首頁 蒲公英的家 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 09/30/2014 07:28:44
? 很優美的詩，中英都好。欣賞！ - 膠老爺 - ♂