from Rachel's English 2

請提意見， 該如何提高。

Tonight I am meeting up with my friends in the
West Village for pizza. We may stay in the West village afterwards, or we may
hop on our bike and go to UCB for a comedy show.

One of my favorite things to do with a free day is to
ride my bike. Sometimes I’ll ride along the Hudson river or Central park,
sometimes I’ll go to visit my friends in
Brooklyn.