子同2015-09-15 12:01:11回複悄悄話
回複 '雙兒02155' 的評論 : It's, indeed, a beautiful translation! Thank you very much for these elegant and delightful phrases! Especially, I like the rhyme that you introduced, which has been compromised in my original version.
I arise from my dreams
Rock has turned into sand moraine
I arise from my dreams
Fire has burned down with only ashes remain
I arise from my dreams
Smooth flesh has turned into muddy stains
I arise from my dreams
Happy songs left nothing but tombstone ingrain
O I dream the dreams filled with bright
But I arise from my dreams to sleepless night!
I arise from my dreams
Rock has turned into sand moraine
I arise from my dreams
Fire has burned down with only ashes remain
I arise from my dreams
Smooth flesh has turned into muddy stains
I arise from my dreams
Happy songs left nothing but tombstone ingrain
O I dream the dreams filled with bright
But I arise from my dreams to sleepless night!
注：我是你同學的同學，上述譯文是她讓我瞎湊出來的.如果譯得不好敬請斧正（smile).也歡迎你來訪問我的博客.