菜鳥初登詩壇 多謝指教 [憶秦娥-------秋思寄亡友]

   實為菜鳥 緣思摯友故 冒然登出 不吝賜教    

 

                             

 

                                    憶秦娥-------秋思寄亡友

                      

                                          秋風至,

                                          花殘葉落南飛雁.

                                          南飛雁,

                                          行行秋壯,

                                          倍添愁悵.

 

                                         天涯咫尺何時見,

                                         綿綿秋雨陰陽阻.

                                         陰陽阻,

                                         別離淒楚,

                                         訴說無處.