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November 30, 2008

Turkey Narritive

“Woof, Woof!”, I heard. My heart pounded frantically. They are getting close I thought. “Hide!”, I whispered to my friend BooBoohead. We stumbled over a blueberry patch trying to avoid the hunting hounds. Everything was so hard to see because the haze that covered the ground and the fog that clouded the sky. I saw BooBoohead pluck some blueberries from the patch and gulp them down shakily. I knew what he felt like. This was the most feared day for all turkeys…Thanksgiving Day.

BooBoohead and I huddled closer together. On top of all the confusion a hunting horn’s long sad cries pierced the air. A few minutes later there was a “Caught it!”, and I knew a turkey was captured. Suddenly a big furry canine burst out of the blueberry patch catching BooBoohead and I off guard. The next thing I knew I was getting separated from BooBoohead. “Noooooooooo!”, I screamed knowing it wouldn’t help. I flew back, hit something hard and muttered “no”, weakly. Everything seemed to be fading away now. Even the “PANG , PANG!”, of the hunters’ loud violent sticks were going away. Softer……softer…softer.

I woke up with a start. I got up and rushed through the woods as fast as I could. The haze had finally cleared up, but there was still some smoke from the hunters’ bombs. I rushed to the edge of the woods and skidded to a stop. There they were, the captured turkeys. The sight of me in the bushes cheered them up………way too much because apparently the hunters saw me and pulled out their long, violent sticks and pointed them at me. Suddenly, everything turned slow like in the movies where they call it slowmotion. “PANG, PANG!”, six white, shiny thingies came at me really slowly. I sidestepped to dogde the first two darts and I dodged the next two by ducking and the last two by jumping. Then in a really low voice one of the hunters said “Hey, turkeys can’t do matrix!”. “Bam!”,I crashed into the guts of one hunter and the ribs of the second. They fell down writhing in pain. “Run!”, I yelled to the other turkeys.

That night we had a big celebration. We had crunchy little beetles for the appetizer, worms for the main course, and blueberies for the dessert. At the very end I was given a big reward……..enough worms to last 300,000,000,000,000,000,000 years. That Thanksgiving Day no turkey was killed, so the hunters could only have some vegetables for their feast.
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寒枝 回複 悄悄話 回複qianqiuxue的評論:
謝謝雪。我也很為他自豪呢。希望他能堅持下去,越寫越好。
qianqiuxue 回複 悄悄話 寒,你的小寶貝很有寫作才能啊。寫得繪聲繪色的。真棒!
寒枝 回複 悄悄話 回複悉采心的評論:
Andrew 喜歡看書,大概這些詞都是從那些小說裏看來的:)
也祝采心新年愉快!
寒枝 回複 悄悄話 回複虔謙的評論:
謝謝虔謙!也祝虔謙新年快樂!
我前幾天一直很忙,沒有來看過自己的博客:(
悉采心 回複 悄悄話 孩子真棒,都會用frantically,pierced了!Wow

問候寒枝一家,聖誕愉快!!
虔謙 回複 悄悄話 是孩子的作文? 頂一下!

問候寒枝, 祝聖誕節新年快樂!
寒枝 回複 悄悄話 回複白林的評論:
白林好!看到你來真是又驚又喜!也祝你聖誕快樂!
白林 回複 悄悄話 寒枝好.因為忙好久沒來看你了.祝你聖誕節快樂!
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