Try to remember--＂懷想＂及試譯的中文歌詞

"Try To Remember"
Brothers four

Try to remember the kind of September
when life was slow and oh, so mellow.
Try to remember the kind of September
when grass was green and grain was yellow.
Try to remember the kind of September
when you were a tender and callow fellow,
Try to remember and if you remember the follow.

Try to remember when life was so tender
that no one wept except the willow.
Try to remember when life was so tender that
dreams were kept beside your pillow.
Try to remember when life was so tender that
love was an ember about to billow.
Try to remember and if you remember then follow.

Deep in December it's nice to remember
altho you know the snow will follow.
Deep in December it's nice to remember
without the hurt the heart is hollow.
Deep in December it's nice to remember
the fire of September that made us mellow.
Deep in December our hearts should remember and follow.

試譯歌詞---

"懷想"

懷想九月，悠遊時光。
草色青青，穀物金黃。
九月如你，青澀溫柔，
如你記得，請隨我唱。

懷想九月，溫暖時光。
泣柳飛揚，無人感傷。
懷想九月，寸斷柔腸。
離離夢境，遺落枕旁。

懷想九月，溫暖時光。
愛如炭火，悠然綻放。
懷想九月，寸斷柔腸。
如你記得，請隨我唱。

深冬已至，心猶懷想。
思念已矣，雪之將降。
心猶懷想，空餘感傷。
九月火焰，溫我心房。

[我是瓦倫鐵諾]

這翻譯的歌詞真美呀。我是在黎明和舒淇主演的電影《玻璃之城》裏聽到這首歌的。很老的電影，我卻前不久才看過。很純潔美麗的愛情，配上這個曲子，意猶未盡。我還很喜歡黎明和張曼玉的《甜蜜蜜》，裏麵黎小軍終於把女朋友從大陸接來香港，在自己婚禮上看到打工期間像情人一樣陪伴他的李翹時，兩個人包含深情的對望，真是美極了。

[bambooseven]

謝謝婭米!!

[婭米]

翻譯得非常好！真難得！

[bambooseven]

謝謝小米小麥。。把我說得不好意思了。這歌詞太難翻了，我翻了三遍。。。要符合原意，又要押韻，其實譯文並不完美。不是因為你，我不敢翻的。
＾＿＾

[小米和小麥]

太美了，我好喜歡，用這樣詩賦的形式而且一點不造作很自然地表現出來，太好了～～謝謝！

你真是心有芬芳的女子！

[bambooseven]

好吧，我試試。＾＿＾

[小米和小麥]

回複bambooseven的評論:
你翻翻看吧，給我看～
我看到好的英文歌詞也常有翻成中文的衝動，但我知道自己功力還不夠。你的中英文都很好，試試看吧，很期待呢～

[bambooseven]

謝謝小米小麥，歌詞很美，想試試翻譯，但怕翻壞了，沒味道了。。。

[小米和小麥]

我也是很喜歡這首歌，詞和旋律都好美！