聲聲慢

江南大雪，借魏老美文首句，調寄《聲聲慢》

 

柳眉隕黛

花語銷魂

今宵誰叩柴門

屋外蒼茫環顧

卻是無人

寒英捎來冷意

在枝頭，化作香痕

摘一朵，問梅妃可恨

閬苑流雲

 

長歎東風太遠

總念念，瑤池何處逢春

縱有瓊台玉宇

一抹輕塵

窗前飄來鶴影

恰相思，正撲黃昏

幾多次，盼衡陽雁字

煙鎖孤村

[johnson1]

I like this one. I noticed that your poems (especially this one) are so good. Can you send your poems (with these) to [e-mail]? I am collecting poems which will be published in " North America Chinese Poems (2024)". Thanks.