聲聲慢

江南大雪，借魏老美文首句，調寄《聲聲慢》

 

柳眉隕黛,花語銷魂,今宵誰叩柴門.

屋外蒼茫環顧,卻是無人.

寒英捎來冷意,在枝頭，化作香痕.

摘一朵，與梅妃同恨,閬苑流雲.

 

長歎東風太遠，總念念，瑤池何處逢春。

縱有瓊台樓宇，一抹輕塵。

窗前飄來鶴影，恰相思，正撲黃昏。

幾多次，盼衡陽鴻雁，夢鎖孤村

[johnson1]

I like this one. I noticed that your poems (especially this one) are so good. Can you send your poems (with these) to [e-mail]? I am collecting poems which will be published in " North America Chinese Poems (2024)". Thanks.