蝶戀花---贈雁歸秋之《火柴天堂》

白玉妝成寒壁峭.

飛雁歸時, 先報春來早.

浪漫巴黎拋舊惱,

倚窗斜看夕陽好.

鐵塔巋然長夜老.

冰月不言, 無限心思邈

最是動人綿意繞,

三天兩夜情癡了.

[飄俠]

好意境！

最是動人綿意繞,
三天兩夜情癡了.

[雁歸秋]

下把得贈歌了,而且要是原唱的...

[虔謙]

Just use my lunch time to rush here to thank you for your comments and helps! I encourgage you my friend to write more too, you've got so good style....
have a good one!