CBA7的心靈港灣

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Piano

(2023-09-26 07:45:42) 下一個

black keys
white keys
touched by
moving fingers that
connected with
a singing heart
metal pedals
kissed by
nodding feet

the sound of music
dancing and flowing in
keys
pedals
fingers
feet
ears
eyes
hair
breaths
air
reaching the hearts
that are listening

Comments from Allpoetry:
Emeline Moche - Your poem is short but so moving, the short words in the second stanzas feel like music!

brandon- - such an incredible write. the flow and imagery were remarkable. thank you for this tight share.

kaye - A lovely write selected for fpp recognition. Wonderful musicality to this.

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CBA7 回複 悄悄話 這首詩於2023年11月29日被選上了Allpoetry的首頁(Front Page Picks, FPP)。
Allpoetry is the world's largest and best poetry site.

CBA7 回複 悄悄話 回複 '可能成功的P' 的評論 : P君的留言像P君一樣靈動可愛 :)謝謝。

CBA7 回複 悄悄話 回複 '菲兒天地' 的評論 : Thank you for reading and commenting.

可能成功的P 回複 悄悄話 琴鍵般跳躍的字詞
菲兒天地 回複 悄悄話 “the short words in the second stanzas feel like music!” !

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