Many a me 在英文詩歌網站上首頁 顯擺一把

好玩的是這個網站是個電腦高手弄的，他弄了個給詩歌打分的，按照分數置頂，不過他也“優化”他的打分係統。最新版給的分數和老板幾乎180度轉彎。這個是近一年前寫的，那時分數很低的，新版來了，竟然置頂了。哈哈哈。

 

Many a Me

Many a Me
drowned in your eyes
roll down your face
and fall onto my palms
cold and warm
Seep through my fingers
drop by drop
vanish into the soil
© Oct '22

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Shidare - It sounds like the beautiful song of a teardrop.... Singing of the melancholic life of its own kind. The rythym... very soothing and easy. Beautiful precious one
6 hours ago

Busy - Fantastic poem. I can relate to it well. Keep going
8 hours ago

Busy - Interpretation first put forward by the profound german philosopher professor martin Heidegger. Or was it Nietzsche before him. I dunno! Lol
7 hours ago

Busy - But lol this is but my interpretation of the poem. Sorry if it is miles out.
7 hours ago

Busy - We all get sanded down and vanished like pieces of wood lol in Zen I think they call it the lacquer barrel but I am not sure. But I had a friend a few years ago telling me about it. You never know it may be a universal! But as a particular it related to me anyway. Great poem.
7 hours ago