Clarity, Substance metaphor, symbolism, rhythm 質勝文則野文勝質則史

metaphor, symbolism, and rhythm

here's a list of advice for effective writing:

Avoid Fixation on Meaning (毋意):

Don't insist on a specific meaning or theme in your writing.
Allow the beauty of the writing itself to capture attention, even if it lacks a predefined purpose.
Writing doesn't always need a predetermined significance; let readers discover the nuances.

Simplicity and Quality (毋必):

Prioritize simplicity in your writing; avoid using words, sentences, or concepts unnecessarily.
Quality should prevail over quantity; strive for impactful, concise expression.
Understand the tradeoff between depth and breadth, recognizing the need for a balanced approach.

Avoid Conformity (毋固):

Resist conforming to fixed patterns or templates in writing, steering clear of conventional styles.
Embrace freedom in expression; let your writing evolve naturally without rigid adherence to norms.
Break away from stereotypes and be open to experimentation.

Reader-Centric Approach (毋我):

Focus on a reader-centric approach; avoid writing solely based on personal intentions or desires.
Recognize the interactive nature of writing, where readers play a crucial role.
Writers are not saviors; embrace the idea that readers are diverse and may interpret your work differently.

Adaptability and Openness:

Be adaptable in your writing style, adjusting to different topics, tones, and purposes.
Embrace the idea that writing is a dynamic process, subject to constant evolution and refinement.
Remain open to feedback and diverse perspectives, allowing your writing to grow.

Freedom from Formality:

Steer clear of rigid formalities such as fixed structures or prescribed language use.
Allow your writing to flow freely, exploring different lengths and styles without unnecessary constraints.
Break away from the shackles of formal conventions to achieve a more natural and engaging expression.

Focus on Aesthetic Appeal:

Place importance on the aesthetic elements of language, using metaphor, symbolism, and rhythm to enhance the visual and auditory appeal.
Recognize that the beauty of writing often lies in its artistic presentation.

Continuous Learning:

Acknowledge that writing is a skill that improves with regular practice.
Read widely to expose yourself to different writing styles and genres, fostering continuous learning and growth.

Purposeful Editing:

Embrace the iterative nature of writing by regularly editing and revising your work.
Refine your language, structure, and overall presentation to enhance the impact of your message.

Individuality in Expression:

Cultivate your unique voice and style, avoiding imitation of others.
Celebrate individuality in expression, allowing your writing to stand out authentically.

Remember that these pieces of advice are intended to provide guidance, and each writer may find their unique approach to effective and meaningful expression.

 

how to write well? Your advice? my notes: 回答了四句話：質勝文則野，文勝質則史。文質彬彬，然後君子。啥意思，古人說話就是雲裏霧裏的。其實就是說，文學是門藝術，藝術就是形式，內容盡在形式中。質勝文，你也許可以狠狠地感動少數人；文勝質，你可以淡淡地感動許多人。二者不可得兼，君子就是個Tradeoff。

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Your notes touch upon the essence of effective writing, emphasizing the balance between substance and style. Here are some pieces of advice based on your reflections:

1. Clarity and Substance:

   • Prioritize clarity in your writing. Ensure that your ideas are expressed in a straightforward manner, avoiding unnecessary complexity.
   • Substance is crucial. A well-articulated message with meaningful content is the foundation of effective writing.

2. Artistry in Form:

   • Recognize writing as an art form. Just as a painting or a musical composition, writing involves crafting a piece with attention to form, structure, and style.
   • Pay attention to the artistic elements of language, such as metaphor, symbolism, and rhythm, to enhance the overall impact of your writing.

3. Balance of Quality and Quantity:

   • Strive for a balance between quality and quantity. While impactful writing can deeply resonate with a few, accessible and well-crafted writing has the potential to reach a broader audience.
   • Understand that there is a tradeoff between depth and breadth in communication, and find the balance that aligns with your goals and audience.

4. Tailor Your Message:

   • Consider your audience. Tailor your writing style and content to suit the preferences and expectations of your readers.
   • Adapt your approach based on the purpose of your writing, whether it's to inform, persuade, entertain, or evoke emotions.

5. Edit and Revise:

   • Writing is a process. Don't hesitate to edit and revise your work. Refine your language, structure, and overall presentation to enhance the impact of your message.
   • Seek feedback from others to gain insights and perspectives that can improve your writing.

6. Read Widely:

   • Expand your literary horizons by reading a diverse range of materials. Exposure to different styles and voices can enrich your own writing and provide inspiration.

7. Practice Regularly:

   • Writing is a skill that improves with practice. Set aside dedicated time for writing regularly, whether it's journaling, creative writing, or professional communication.

Remember that effective writing is a continuous learning process, and each piece you write contributes to your growth as a writer. Embrace the creative and expressive nature of writing while remaining mindful of your communication goals. 

 

你來問我怎樣才能寫出好文章？

 

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不是AI，我也不知道。為人父問了ChatGPT，卻不滿意答案。同樣的問題，我也問了我的AI DH-V2.5。V2.5表示數據庫更新到兩千五百年前。DH-V2.5告訴我四條原則：毋意，毋必，毋固，毋我。這什麽意思？古人說話就這麽十三不靠。估計言者自己也搞不清，自己肯定做不到。所以他一輩子連塊豆腐幹文章也沒寫過。既姑妄言之，且姑妄解釋之。

毋意，可能在說文章不需有意義。或者說寫文章不能主題先行。更不能沾什麽“文以載道”的邊。文章要寫得好看才有人讀，沒人讀載道道也不靈。文章漂亮了，自有讀者發掘出這有一道那有一道，道道多似斑馬。。。那是因為斑馬漂亮。老太太的皺紋比斑馬道道還多呢，可你寧願看那連一道都沒有的小姑娘吹彈可破的臉。顏值即真理。道可道毋意道。

毋必則簡單，沒有什麽詞必用、句子必寫、觀念必須表達。任何有害文章美觀的東西，皆可刪掉。文章可以有長有短，卻不能臃腫。不要舍不得，你以為在割心頭肉，其實在讀者眼裏那些都是廢話。管你精肉肥肉，堆在腰上都是贅肉。至於這樣下來，你原來準備罵張三的文章變成誇李四的了，這就對了。說明並非偶然，天成之！

毋固，就是要不落俗套。像八股文大學論文那樣的固定模式固然是美文的大敵，但哪怕你再喜歡那個作家的文風，不要去模仿。更不要套範文寫作。自由地寫，意猶未盡多寫幾句，稍不滿意全部刪掉。。。不要追求什麽風格，風格的唯一作用就是讓你固步自封。毋固毋固，固所願耳。。。

毋我這條最重要。就是說，作者為文，一定不能總想著我要寫什麽，我要告訴讀者什麽。寫作從來都是以讀者為主的互動過程。作者從來都不是什麽救世主，但讀者個個都是上帝。以為自己寫啥讀者就會信啥或讀者就按啥去理解那是自信傻了。這一點，別說凡人做不到，教主聖人們也做不到。就算上帝親自來發帖子，也一定會被歪樓直歪到巴別塔倒掉。。。至於有人懷著教訓讀者的心態作文，結果不外是自己成為那唯一的讀者。從而達到了自己教育自己的目的，還能一個人吭哧吭哧往上頂自己的帖子。。。

有人懷疑這樣寫出來的，還有核心內容嗎？我又問了V2.5。又回答了四句話：質勝文則野，文勝質則史。文質彬彬，然後君子。啥意思，古人說話就是雲裏霧裏的。其實就是說，文學是門藝術，藝術就是形式，內容盡在形式中。質勝文，你也許可以狠狠地感動少數人；文勝質，你可以淡淡地感動許多人。二者不可得兼，君子就是個Tradeoff。

你是準備寫出來就很快得到許多讚，還是要苦苦地等待那總未出現的知音。。。這是個問題，還是個隻能問自己無法問ChatGTP的問題。類似的問題，目前還發現了另一個：驢十八倔不倔？

很抱歉，我不能理解您的詢問。請提出更具體的問題。

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• 存疑！ -Vivian32817-    (65 bytes) (38 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:10:44

• 十三不靠，自成 一大 胡 。。。 -FarewellDonkey18-    (0 bytes) (1 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:18:06

• 楊四郎探母。-：） -有言-    (0 bytes) (2 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 19:29:00

• 有言君好。你變幽默了~~~ -Vivian32817-    (0 bytes) (1 reads) 02/15/2023 postreply 10:01:26

• 混茶壇的好處。-：） -有言-    (0 bytes) (0 reads) 02/15/2023 postreply 21:01:25

• 文質彬彬，然後君子（文成） -.川曄-    (0 bytes) (2 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:29:44

• 成在坐標上的哪一點，你的選擇；君子被標在坐標上的哪一點，別人的選擇。。。 -FarewellDonkey18-    (0 bytes) (1 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:33:51

• 對對，我想我最後大概隻能選擇我字寫我心 -.川曄-    (0 bytes) (1 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:35:35

• 那就質勝文，你是個野丫頭。。。 -FarewellDonkey18-    (0 bytes) (1 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:42:36

• 555，大師，有人說過我是個劉姥姥 -.川曄-    (161 bytes) (15 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:43:34

• 不會。劉姥姥隻是大觀園的野趣。。。你夠上狂風暴雪了。。。 -FarewellDonkey18-    (0 bytes) (5 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:45:48

• 因為我一進山就穿得披紅掛綠的，還有一點也不會像嬌滴滴的林黛玉 -.川曄-    (0 bytes) (0 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:47:20

• “道可道毋意道。“這是更進了一步了~~~ -Vivian32817-    (0 bytes) (2 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:31:27

• 從實， 我是胡謅的，你在我臉上添了一道。。。。 -FarewellDonkey18-    (0 bytes) (3 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:39:09

• 沒什麽。我知你不在乎吹彈可破~~~ -Vivian32817-    (0 bytes) (0 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 09:51:26

• 君子就是個Tradeoff，中庸不trade，也不off。嗬嗬。 -dhyang_wxc-    (0 bytes) (1 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 10:04:29

• 不off，則不得中。。。 -FarewellDonkey18-    (0 bytes) (2 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 10:40:41

• 不off，有中，有不中。不中生用。嗬嗬。 -dhyang_wxc-    (0 bytes) (0 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 10:59:36

• 有話要説，非說不可之時自然就好。 -中間小謝-   (47 bytes) (43 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 10:21:19

• 靠，四大惡人哪去了？有四惡必有四美。寫文章必雪，必唐，必V，必蘭，可乎？ -FarewellDonkey18-    (0 bytes) (13 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 10:43:15

• 不可。今人之弊，為文過多，至泛濫世間；又AI 捉筆，傾刻萬言，妄矣。 -中間小謝-   (129 bytes) (28 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 11:03:20

• 大師啥眼神，醜石才美！ -snowandlotus-    (0 bytes) (1 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 16:42:19

• 四毋原則不就是我說的境界嗎？隨心所欲不逾矩，到這境界，咋寫都流暢通順，這叫辯才無礙。比如石凳。 -為人父-    (287 bytes) (37 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 10:50:07

• 遵命，就這一篇，基本四毋了 -FarewellDonkey18-    (81 bytes) (38 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 11:02:32

• 道通天地有形外，思入風雲變態中。萬物靜觀皆自得，四時佳興與人同。前人之述，備得厲害。：） -dhyang_wxc-    (0 bytes) (7 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 11:40:56

• 用得巧：） -snowandlotus-    (0 bytes) (0 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 16:10:56

• 言簡意賅，符合客觀實際又有他人所不知的獨特之處，此即好文章。 -主流媒體-    (0 bytes) (5 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 14:48:20

• 爆笑！神驢大師，這篇我要收藏！ -snowandlotus-    (0 bytes) (4 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 16:07:03

• 哈哈哈哈。不倔如驢18匹斑馬拉。-：） -有言-    (0 bytes) (1 reads) 02/14/2023 postreply 19:27:10