F1.3.5-7 Morns like these - we parted -

F1.3.5-7 (Fascicle one Sheet three Stanza 5-7）

From Emily Dickinson’s Poems As She Preserved Them. Edited by Christine Miller

Morns like these - we parted -
Noons like these - she rose -
Fluttering first - then firmer
To her fair response.

這樣的清晨- 我們永別 -
這樣的中午 - 她升天了 -
先飄忽 - 後堅定地
做出她的決定 -


Never did she lisp it -
It was not for me -
She - was mute from transport -
I - from agony -

她一點都不含糊其訶 -
但那不是為我 -
她 - 於天途中保持緘默 -
我 - 因為痛苦欲言無聲 -


Till - the evening nearing
One the curtains drew -
Quick! A sharper rustling!
And this linnet flew!

一直 - 挨近晚上
窗簾拉來了-
快！ 一陣悉索！
這隻紅雀飛走了！

[nuts000]

謝謝，那就改一下

[寒芯]

讚一個！可以提個小建議嗎？
她-於天途中保持緘默，
我-因為痛苦沉默無言。