Accidental Find

Finding the music of
message in a bottle
must be just as exciting
as find a real message in a bottle by the beach
as we imagine in our future life
A poem might be too much
for a message floating in the sea
for hundreds of years
perhaps just the 3 L words
live, love and laugh
and leave the rest
forever after

[nuts000]

這首很不錯，好像填詞功力大增 : )

[細豆莢]

南鄉子。 雪痕

一夜雪飄東，白色蒼蒼雁跡空，溪飲寒冰心向遠，忡忡，化作晶瑩詩句叢。

晨起霧雲瞳，喜見留痕夢語中，雪影飄飄書厚意，融融，一片關懷入酒濃。

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