會跳舞的眼淚[英文]

TEARS THAT CAN DANCE

The tears that can dance

In Yesterday’s memory

Deeply buried inside

Tomorrow’s death 

Darkness    :

Time’s dearest rose    :

Can break the coldest

Heart at-the-first-secret-glance 

The pain happily Free of

Philosophizing hands---

Truth as much as lies!

It belongs to no one! 

The tears can dance

To whatever music

Played on those soft

Simmering—Quivering--Lips

. . .

:: z.z. 2006

[未夕]

yy "我覺得中文寫起來很美，尤其是繁體字"
對的。漢字簡化後，很多字的原意從字形上已看不出來了。嗚嗚！
漢字電腦輸入方式尚需改良。希望能推廣語音識別等更智能化方式。
當然，寫詩不受輸入速度限製 :)

[y.y.]

“是否將發明漢字的老祖宗也拉來適當地批一批？”

真的？ 我覺得中文寫起來很美，尤其是繁體字：)

[未夕]

"未夕=wx000???" yes!
"Nice ID!!!!" 謝謝！

早就想申請中文ID, 可惜我輸入中文的速度太慢。
是否將發明漢字的老祖宗也拉來適當地批一批？

[作舟詩集]

未夕=wx000???
Nice ID!!!! :)
白酒,Saki,beer,伏特加.....!!相見恨晚哪！:))

[未夕]

zz "sounds like wx000 can drink a lot" 哈哈，好漢不提當年“勇“。五瓶酒，一人一瓶, for zz, yy, zf, lz and wx。如果白酒受不了，可以要Saki 或 beer。sd, 魚兒等若來遲了，則隻有伏特加恭候 … drink bear ...together...with...tear...

Cheers!!!

[作舟詩集]

LZ: 我試著把她背誦出來，有很活躍的韻律。
Hi, LZ, 背誦 is a really good way to learn for me too....!!

YY, really enjoy your translation!!! good control of words, rhythm!!!!
cheers!!!
....
sounds like wx000 can drink a lot.....:)

[律周]

誰能告訴我在美國出版中文書籍的出版社？
謝謝。

[y.y.]

會跳舞的眼淚

昨日記憶裏
會跳舞的眼淚
深埋於
明日的死亡

黑暗：
時間親密無間的玫瑰：
能以最初--- 那秘密的--- 一瞥
令最冷酷的心碎裂

痛苦歡快地免於
哲學化的手 - - -
真實與謊言一樣！
不屬於任何人！

在任何柔軟
情感鬱積- - -顫抖的唇上
奏起的音樂
眼淚都可以隨之
而舞

[未夕]

wx000: "pain happily"! 老板，再上五瓶酒！！!

[律周]

我試著把她背誦出來，有很活躍的韻律。

[作舟詩集]

thanks guys!!!

zf, sometimes your own words are just as good as others'...

yy, your feeling toward the poem is also powerful....

cheers!

[z.f.]

the reason of "a discerning Eye":

"clear and sweet is my soul....and clear and sweet is all that is not my soul.

lack one lacks both....and the unseen is proved by the seen,
Till that becomes unseen and receives proof in its turn."
(W.W.)

I can't control

my thinking

//I think I can//


~o~

[y.y.]

非常喜愛這首詩歌！！！尤其是這一節

Darkness :
Time’s dearest rose :
Can break the coldest
Heart at-the-first-secret-glance

極為的美！視覺上的美，心靈的震撼。。。黑暗：時間最親近的玫瑰。。。絲毫也
不設防。。。一種既無期望，也無失望，於平淡與真實但深邃的眼神裏所流露出來
的人性之光。。。

[作舟詩集]

you are so welcome, zf!!

[z.f.]

LOVE IT!!!!!!

What a discerning Eye!!!!! (attention: I am using one eye here...)

I respect what you express here totally...

"From then on

All of my life

I have been searching

for the unveiled face

of truth"

understood!!!

thanks for your generous sharing always...