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 TIME

nonspatial

continuum

irreversible

 succession

past-present-future

interval

separating points

duration

 war

 minutes

 reckoned

solar
 span

 conditions

 phenomena

era

hard

 +

troubles

prevailing

trends

self

nonbeing

selfless

water

0

change
opportune

moment or season

taking stock
designated

activity

harvest

 bed

words

love

appointed

 fated 

death

 birth

multiplied or divided

engagement

certain occasion

apprenticeship

sentence
rate

 speed

 measured

 marching

 in double  
music

three-quarter

the tempo
constructed

payable

unthinkable

indissoluable

here

there

be

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y.y. 回複 悄悄話 so, that's why they're interested in National Geography . . .

remember, the English Patient ?

they can colonize external Land but not internal one . . . :)

maybe i am wrong :)

Only "rebels" look into their hearts and soul :)

z.z. 回複 悄悄話 why not british??

:)

remember, the british were the oldest colonialists....
影雲 回複 悄悄話 maybe french or american :)
should not be british :)

LTG 回複 悄悄話 like all your comments ..... you all inspire me to say more even though i am working now :)

"gaze" has been a big subject in film studies, which overlaps a lot with lit...

modern technology has turned people into visual animals.....

considering the time when that foto was taken, i am positive that it must have been taken by an European or American ....

what comes in mind now??

Orientalism!!!!!
知凡 回複 悄悄話 "real art, like this foto, is to reveal a soulful and real moment between humans...."

!!!!!!!!

can't agree with you more.....
影雲 回複 悄悄話 i personally think, what's beneath Feminism is the awakening of senses and to live to her fullest of life as a woman, as a Man (interesting, when i put Man here), more than asking for "being equal" . . . a man who does not search for his soul is still "inferior" and new to his internal landscape . . . such as Joe Wu in your novel . . .

this photo is classic, not only because it was taken back then and historical, but it captures something in which words are meaningless . . . as i always say, the beauty of mystery . . . depending on our imagination to "interpret" it . two little fawns see their reflections in each other's eyes on the surface of water . . .
作舟詩集 回複 悄悄話 "...另外這張照片的場景在窗邊,很有意味,窗戶,眼睛也是窗戶,還有窗戶的形狀,這樣的方格形狀,透過拘束,Boy的眼神,Nude 露出的是上半身。。。如果換成全裸,會是什麽效果???..."

well said!!!

in lit studies and film studies, the male/female gaze was the earlier, but the most important element that caters human curiosity.....

so, commercial films are to attract people's eyes only....not much of their heart and soul.....

real art, like this foto, is to reveal a soulful and real moment between humans....

the boundary between trash and art sometimes is very thin.....even ambiguous...

thanx a lot!!!
知凡 回複 悄悄話 “modern lit. & visual productions used to be dominated by male gaze, that is, female is being looked at, like an object....”

所以那些是productions。。。“There are fundamental differences between/Creation and production” “A ‘product’ has no internal value”。。。

另外,仔細看攝影裏Boy 和 Nude 的眼神很不一樣,但是卻互通。。。就像作舟的詩裏,看不到neighbor girl’s 眼神,但是詩歌裏畫麵的描述是一雙眼睛所敞開的窗戶,窗內的美“burned /my stealing/eyes”。。。而此時從詩裏看到的除了窗內的美,更看到一雙眼睛,就像那個Nude所凝視的那雙眼睛。。。再讀詩歌的第一節。。。

(gaze一下,這首詩與這張攝影在一起很秒不可言。。。)
知凡 回複 悄悄話 這幅照片裏,是一個Boy 和一個 Nude還有他們的膚色, 如果換成成人的Male, Female,或換成別的膚色,想想會是什麽效果??? 這張照片裏我以為更體現了男女平等發生在同樣 innocent的眼睛之間。。。這張照片震動我的是自然與一樣 innocent 的眼睛,自然的 Boy 和自然的 Nude,他們的姿態和眼神的自然與和諧,毫不設防,傳達著某種難以言明的交流,抑或什麽都沒有交流,隻是一個瞬間的美。。。使照片很傳神,神即很原始很自然的一種不設防,這種瞬間發生在一個健康的 Boy 和一個健康的 Nude之間。。。一個“健康”的Boy這樣看一個Nude很自然,一個“健康”的Nude沒有任何羞澀或忸怩,為什麽?其實以女人的心態來說,渴望被gaze and gaze back,但是前提是對什麽樣的眼睛和眼神,對象很重要,你們看到過那種眼睛嗎?讓你們有願望可以赤裸裸而無所拘束快樂表達“野性”的眼睛。。。這張照片裏包含了很多未言明的美感與吸引。。。另外這張照片的場景在窗邊,很有意味,窗戶,眼睛也是窗戶,還有窗戶的形狀,這樣的方格形狀,透過拘束,Boy的眼神,Nude 露出的是上半身。。。如果換成全裸,會是什麽效果???所以希望,希望在哪裏?男女平等在陽光下怎麽可能???即使在夜裏,現代人多是“各懷鬼胎”,少有不設防的“純淨”,怎麽可能男女平等???即使在窗戶邊也是一個 Boy and Nude。。。The fuel of hope is innocence...

作舟的詩抓住了這張照片的關鍵,表達了一個 Nature Boy 的自然,詩人這樣不設防的回憶,給我的感覺很藝術很美很動人,什麽都沒有多想,隻是覺得那一刻很自然。。。
LTG 回複 悄悄話 the female nude gazing back in the foto seems very interesting to me....

modern lit. & visual productions used to be dominated by male gaze, that is, female is being looked at, like an object....

part of feminist lit. was to "gaze back," right??

i was struck by the time when the foto was taken, and the gazing back of the nude....male is not dominant, but only a boy figure who looks inncently....

thus, my own memory ... :)

thanx!
影雲 回複 悄悄話 love the purity of the poem . . .vividly and naturally
capturing the atmosphere
of the ineffable moment
of gazing - - - eyes'
soundless communicating

cannot help changing Philippe Denis' poem
as the following - - - some feeling alike


"daylight confession . . .into
the teeth of time . . ."
作舟詩集 回複 悄悄話 文學城又出毛病了??

thanx, zf, for your artistic response!!!!

that vintage foto definitely inspired me......taken in 1915!!!!

can't believe it!!!!
知凡 回複 悄悄話 文學城又出毛病了, 你樓上的新詩無法發表評論。。。

就像那幅很美的攝影一樣,你的新詩也是,非常ART,非常美。。。喜歡!!!
我讀到美酒的味道:)

我喜歡這類藝術。。。soft eyes... tender heart... Nature boy!!!

These are colors of
infinity leading me on
a Voyage towards
a simple lesson:
Love is what keeps
it going . . . .

thank you for sharing your ART...

more later...

cheers!!!
LTG 回複 悄悄話 hi LZ, ZF,

good to see you blog on Sunday ....:)

i was indeed inspired from learning about fractals.....

realization: there is much to be learned....

thanx!!
知凡 回複 悄悄話 看到新意的東西很開心,讀到這首NEW STYLE的詩我有點興奮。。。全詩的每一個字,每一個字都很有意蘊。。。讀,且讀,還有節奏,音樂,是人聲的音樂,最後的 O m 〈〈〈〈... 餘音繞梁,三日不絕:)))

“you mean the "devil" or the "beast?"

a Beast with a Tender Heart :)

“guess you have seen the connection between this poem and my post about" fractals" downstairs.....”

穿透鴻蒙是我讀完後的一種感覺,我找不到合適的WORDS,所以“魔鬼般”用的是引號, 因為找不到合適的 WORD。。。imagination 需要new language … OM…

確實,這首詩的美感與your post about“fractals”有connection…

你詩歌的ART 越來越 ART 了:) 我很欣賞的那種 TASTE AND STYLE,...瞧,我又找不到合適的 WORDS…
律周 回複 悄悄話 時間的無始終,空間的無垠,可愛的球.
作舟詩集 回複 悄悄話 yy,zf & sd,

all your reading and interpretation about OM are amamzingly insightful....!!!

great minds think alike!!

i assume you all have googled the word OM....

:)

zf: "...每個字逃脫了束縛,逃脫了時間..."

your view here is also my "goal" in writing this from looking up te definition of time....

this is also a "found" poem, i should add...

"...對我來說,整首詩讀來像首隨想曲,發出“魔鬼般”的意蘊..."

:)))

you mean the "devil" or the "beast?"

:)

穿透鴻蒙....

guess you have seen the connection between this poem and my post about" fractals" downstairs.....

cheers to you all!!

by水滴 回複 悄悄話 O~~~M. Nami~Bani~ HO~~M~~~~
優勝美地 回複 悄悄話 "_ O m _"
知凡 回複 悄悄話 “thus, the foolish poem....haha....!!!”

哈哈,這種詩好適合我這種“foolish”的人的胃口。。。我一直很喜歡你那些每行字少的詩,仿佛特別,很有能量的感覺。。。對我來說,整首詩讀來像首隨想曲,發出“魔鬼般”的意蘊:)))。。。蘊涵豐富無盡聯想和領悟但是詩歌給我以透明的質感。。。

每個單字獨立,但是讀來非常連貫。。。

每一個字或幾個相連的字在這首連貫的篇章裏,都可采擷,再作一首歌。。。(我是指以這裏的意蘊。。。)

每個字逃脫了束縛,逃脫了時間,為individual。。。但是又被某種“無形”聯係在一起,成為一首詩,帶來一種穿透力的詩。。。讀來很舒爽。。。

詩裏有很多可解讀的趣味。。。喜歡最後的 “O m”, 讀來像是於末了發出的一聲很愜意的聲音,傳遞著“新概念”,“_ _ O m”的新概念… 於TIME裏,一切不複,“O m”生生不息。。。

? - imagination – language – imagination – new language – imagination …… - ?

如果 language 不限定在語言,而是表達表意表達感覺或意識等等的任何一種形式。。。“language is the needle”,穿透鴻蒙。。。如果不是TIME 的prisoner ,世界對他來說,皆為“混沌”,所以整首詩讀來給我有種穿透力的感覺。。。
影雲 回複 悄悄話 no a single medium is good enough for imagination. . . :)
作舟詩集 回複 悄悄話 language made imagination possible?

or

vice versa??

:)

thanx!
影雲 回複 悄悄話 z.z. yes! love what you said here and enjoy reading this experimental work!

we can, at least, we try to visualize everything around us, visible or invisible, tangible or intangible, of form or formless. . . through feeling and imagination, the Gift. . . . e.g. when we say time, "irreversible', that's just because we, as individual, cannot see recurrences in our life; however, to the eyes of “history”, birth and death are recurring, things like mistakes or wars are repeating . . . stories always there, but carried on by different individuals from the same group of living creatures, that we call humankind . . . endless journeys witnessed by Time . . . or something we call Time.
作舟詩集 回複 悄悄話 thanx, y.y.!!

"conceptualism" has its interesting elements.....but, it's made of "words" after all.... :)

"time" is one of those intriguingconcepts that can make us sound quite "foolish" at times.... :)

can we visualize "time?" etc...

thus, the foolish poem....haha....!!!

[...have a great wknd, everybody!!]
影雲 回複 悄悄話 非常喜歡這首詩歌的集中性與散發性,抓住了時間的特性,非常VISUAL!!!感受到
時光如在某個宇宙的隧道裏如洪一樣。。。時間,無岸的河,攜帶著種種。。。各
種聲音匯入與流淌,成為曆史。。。irreversible。。。但在REACHING SOMEWHERE。。。。
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