夢係列之: "meaning" (圖)

夢係列之: meaning the air is thick heart chambers half-lit: something about you i can never get enough darkness travels marking territory longitude & latitude while fire enters you blooding churning bodies squirming songs deminishing love crying meaning meaning .... :: june 05

[LTG]

y.y. & z.f.

enjoy your translations!!!! you each captured different flavor of the "dream"!!

rc,

some dreams are easier to remeber than others, i think....there is the magic time when we first wake up in the morning, and if you keep your closed enough you'll recall the dream....

tell yourself before going to sleep "i will remember the dream!"

hi, miao! nice to meet you!

[知凡]

《含義》


空氣濃濃
心房半燃
關於你的一些
我永不覺到足夠

激情擁你
黑暗漫遊
標示經緯
經過之地

血和血相融
身與體坐不能安
歌聲漸輕
愛在呼喊
含義

含義
....

[“meaning” 一詞太多“meanings”，可意會難言傳……
如這首詩，每個人可讀出不同的“meaning”，秒！
中文翻譯很容易流於直白，不如英文原詩意味深長，我想這是英文詩的魅力吧……]

:)

[妙]

Wonderful ！

[by水滴]

I always have problems to remember a dream, not even mention to interpret them.:)

[影雲]

意義

空氣凝重
心房
若明若暗：
你有些什麽
我永無
止境
地渴望

黑暗前行
標記著版圖
經度 緯度
火
在進入
你

血液沸騰
身體扭曲
歌聲匿跡
愛在呐喊

意義

意
義
。。。

[影雲]

blood[?] churning
bodies squirming
...

[LTG]

san ke you!!

:)

[影雲]

"darkness travels
marking territory
longitude & latitude
while fire
enters you"

Breathtaking!!!