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by 冰呆子
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大寶學校的功課我們從來不管。她是個急性子，每天等不到回家就做完了功課， 好看她的小說。今天難得檢查她的書包，看到她課上寫的作文，這是其中的一篇:
Our team was having a losing streak. Two of our best players were away on atrip. I was substituting for one of them. It was my turn next at bat (這是老師寫的開頭，下麵的是大寶寫的) and I was very nervous. I turned my attention back to the game.
"....Strike three! You're out!" the umpire called. My stomach cringed. I slowly approached.
"Come on, get over here before the game ends!" The pitcher cried.
Red with embarrassment, I hurried to the plate. I swang my bat, then realized the pitcher hadn't thrown the ball yet. I could hear people laughing. I was so embarrassed.
The second timeI hit the ball! It went here and there, bouncing this way and that. It took them a minute to catch the ball! I made a home run!
At that moment, the buzzer rang. I could not believe it! Me? A home run! We won the game 7-6! I hurried home to tell my mom.
When I got home, I could not find her. What if something happened to her? Then I stepped into the kitchen. There were my mom, dad and brother. My teammates were there along with my coach.
"Congrats!" My coach said. He handed me a trophy. I couldn't believe it! I was MVP! I was too shocked to speak.
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After they were gone, we went out for ice cream. This was the best day of my life!
離make New York Times Best Seller list（大寶的夢想）差得還很遠，但老媽迫不及待地把它加在博客裏啦.
by 冰呆子
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大寶學校的功課我們從來不管。她是個急性子，每天等不到回家就做完了功課， 好看她的小說。今天難得檢查她的書包，看到她課上寫的作文，這是其中的一篇:
Our team was having a losing streak. Two of our best players were away on atrip. I was substituting for one of them. It was my turn next at bat (這是老師寫的開頭，下麵的是大寶寫的) and I was very nervous. I turned my attention back to the game.
"....Strike three! You're out!" the umpire called. My stomach cringed. I slowly approached.
"Come on, get over here before the game ends!" The pitcher cried.
Red with embarrassment, I hurried to the plate. I swang my bat, then realized the pitcher hadn't thrown the ball yet. I could hear people laughing. I was so embarrassed.
The second timeI hit the ball! It went here and there, bouncing this way and that. It took them a minute to catch the ball! I made a home run!
At that moment, the buzzer rang. I could not believe it! Me? A home run! We won the game 7-6! I hurried home to tell my mom.
When I got home, I could not find her. What if something happened to her? Then I stepped into the kitchen. There were my mom, dad and brother. My teammates were there along with my coach.
"Congrats!" My coach said. He handed me a trophy. I couldn't believe it! I was MVP! I was too shocked to speak.
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After they were gone, we went out for ice cream. This was the best day of my life!
離make New York Times Best Seller list（大寶的夢想）差得還很遠，但老媽迫不及待地把它加在博客裏啦.
大寶寫了很多的故事，我常常沒看就扔車庫了，以後定對她多鼓勵.
小既：你的小豬豬（小苗苗）博客開了嗎？
加油。鼓勵！