好玩的是這個網站是個電腦高手弄的,他弄了個給詩歌打分的,按照分數置頂,不過他也“優化”他的打分係統。最新版給的分數和老板幾乎180度轉彎。這個是近一年前寫的,那時分數很低的,新版來了,竟然置頂了。哈哈哈。
ManyaMe
ManyaMe
drownedinyoureyes
rolldownyourface
andfallontomypalms
coldandwarm
Seepthroughmyfingers
dropbydrop
vanishintothesoil
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Celloandhisshadow
InsunsetstandsalonelyCello
talkstonoonebuthisshadow
Hiswordsarebuzzingbees
Hissongsaresighingseas
Inatunelikewaveringwillow
Inacolorlikemellowingmeadow
Tillthesunflees
Cellopanicsandpleas
Shadow,Shadow,staywithme
forIwillsingyounightlyglee
Mystringswillneverplucksorrow
forIneedyoueverytomorrow
InsunriseliesacheerfulShadow
cast...[
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Howmanyshadesofgreyinmyshadow
Howmanyshadesofgreyinmyshadow
Itdependsonwherelightcomesfrom
Thesun
Themoon
Oryoursoul
GPT
Thispoemseemstoexploretheideaofperception,subjectivity,andthemultifacetednatureofidentityandexistence.Thepoemusesthemetaphorof"shadesofgreyinmyshadow"tosymbolizethecomplexitiesandnuancesofanindividual'sidentityandpersonality.Here'sadeep...[
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EternalFountain
Atthefootofatoweringmountain
hidesatwinklingfountain
Discoveredbyathirstytraveler
confusedbyitsvoidofwater
Indespairhedecidestopart
Wait,openyourheart
summonsthesummitofthemountain
DrinkLightfromtheEternalFountain
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探訪靈魂的歸宿
探訪靈魂的歸宿
向一位智者問路
他搖搖頭,去那裏的路很多
可是都很堵
也容易走錯
還有啊,那裏很擠
那裏不缺沒有靈魂的你
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SaltymistfromthePacific
SaltymistfromthePacific
coatsourpickupthat'scrustific
diffusesinyourglassofwine
andwetsyourlipsandmine
SaltybreezefromthePacific
seasonsairforthespecific
forouragedkissesthatstillshine
forourheartsthatstillintertwine
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Attheboundarybetweenlightandshadow
Attheboundarybetweenlightandshadow
Ihearaconversation
inthevoicesdeepandshallow
discussingoveradestination
Whethervanishintheeternalhalo
orshuttlebetweentheconcretestations
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Lightprintsawindow
Lightprintsawindow
onagrayvaultedceiling
Whostraightensandsharpensitframing
It'sthelight'ssilentbeau
afeatheryandwarmingshadow
promptedbyLovecat'spoeticsnapshot
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七
你和廉走在薄雪覆蓋的湖畔,你提出來的,你需要足夠新鮮的空氣,冰冷的,讓你能平靜地對廉講你和軒的故事。廉的左手攥著你的右手,有些緊,右手握著保溫杯,裏麵是廉出門前為你煮好的黑咖啡,他堅持這樣,說黑咖啡防凍。
“通過編輯部聯係上後的一個星期我就收到了軒的第一封信。原來我們生活的地方相距不遠,他還生活在那個城市,我家雖然離開了,[
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【最後一頁】
你和她走在去公交車站的路上,沉默無語,偶爾的交流是兩人輕輕碰到一起又迅即分開的肩膀。你期望她的車站很遙遠,或消失在寒冷的夜色裏。你聽著她的腳步,不急不緩,踩在雪上,吱呀,吱呀,她的節奏讓你著迷。
“你覺得今晚的討論怎麽樣?”
她忽然發問,打破了沉寂。被從癡迷中驚醒的你隻好隨口敷衍,很好,很好。
“真的?[
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