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七絕 詠春思歸 (一東韻)  
 
千山雲氣雨隨風，
春陌樓台花色朦。
月下曲溪笙笛寂，
青衫憶昔小橋東。

Submerged in the sea of dampened clouds,
the rugged mountains greeted the spring rain rode with gale.

Through the fields of revitalization,
 A pavilion overlooked a path embellished with hazy silhouette of blossoms

The Moon shone on a tortuous creek,
While the brisk sound of a flute permeated the chilly air quick. 

Echoing the silence of the dull night,  
Touching the heart of a girl with passionate mind.  

Dressed in green satin skirt by a porch, 
The beauty indulged in romantic moments hovering at the east side of a reminiscent bridge.