An interesting story, though there are some typos,

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Re-assured, hard-working: No need to use a hyphen.  

no sooner had I saw this cabin house at the moment then I changed my mind right away and forgot about that downtown house completely.

No sooner had I seen this cabin than I changed my mind and forgot about that downtown house completely

Today > that day?

Hanged > hung?

Coach > couch?