幾處語法錯誤

來源: 於 2016-12-24 13:05:37 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

You seem, not you seems

As light, not as a light

too much noise, not too much noises

Too tight, not too tightly

挺好的詩，改了錯就不一樣了