If you turn on your auto-speller, you can at least get rid of so

simple errors. There are quite a lot of grammatical errors in your essay (I did not have the time to finish reading it). I think you need to work on the use of preposition, noun, and article (both definite and indefinite). I am quite busy this weekend and early next week, but will try to find time to correct some of your errors later next week. Meanwhile, hope people here will correct them before me.